Crit

The image I submitted for crit was not completed so the feedback I got was limited, but very useful none the less. The image I submitted had all the text with the custom H, the hook, the fish, but very limited colour. I had flat colours on the image, but no gradients, so I could not get feedback on the colour.


However, I received positive and negative feedback for the image submitted. 


The positive feedback was that my idea was strong, and instantly recognisable. The image represented the WWII poster that I had chosen well and it was obvious. The layout and overall feel of the image was praised.


The negative feedback that was mentioned was for one, the lack of colour (due to incomplete image). It was commented that the custom 'H' I designed was too heavy, unnecessary, and quite frankly didn't fit. I shall experiment with other ways to create a 'different' letter without it being too distracting. It was also commented that my image had alot of empty space that needed filling. The fact that there was no splash, nor 'water trails' made the image look static and misplaced. This is a serious error that needs to be fixed. I shall fix this by adding trails and a splash, to give a sense of direction.